Saturday, September 01, 2007

Language Quiz

Here's a new quiz - though, as always, maybe there's nothing wrong.
At esurance.com if we can't give you the best deal we'll show you where you can.
The previous quiz was:

The host of Bargain Hunters sums up the rules of the show:

The contestants get 200 pounds and go out into a fair; they only get one hour and "they buy something they think is a bargain. It goes into an auction and the name of the game is to make a profit. And hopefully if they do make a profit they get to keep it. What could be fairer than that?"
"Hopefully" can in fact be used as a sentence modifier, meaning not "in a hopeful manner" but "I say hopefully" - compare "candidly, verily, honestly, frankly" - none of them attract the ire that "hopefully" does, but they're all used in the same way.

But "hopefully" is the problem here. It's misplaced. As a sentence adverb, it has to modify the whole sentence, and here that means the implication is that the contestants might not actually get the money if they make a profit.

What he wants to say is something like "Hopefully they'll make a profit, and if they do they get to keep it.

And look here for Previous Quizzes, 37 so far.

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1 Comments:

At 3:13 PM, September 01, 2007 Anonymous Anonymous had this to say...

At esurance.com if we can't give you the best deal we'll show you where you can.

Where you can what? Weird.

At esurance.com if we can't give you the best deal we'll show you where you can give you the best deal.

That's not what they meant.

At esurance.com if we can't give you the best deal we'll show you where you can get the best deal.

But that's not what they said.

 

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