Friday, September 21, 2007

More fun with grammar checker

Just guess what grammar checker wants changed in this:
The poster wasn’t from Covent Garden, however, but La Scala. The diva, surely, though she didn’t know Callas by sight, stood in a simple white draping robe, white flowers wreathed on her dark head, her hand resting on a boulder barely distinguishable against the dark background.
I sincerely doubt you got it.
The diva stood in simple white draping robe, white flowers wreathed on her dark head...
or
The diva stood in a simple white draping robe, white flower wreathed on her dark head...
Amazing.

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2 Comments:

At 11:50 AM, September 21, 2007 Blogger Barry Leiba had this to say...

Oh, yeah, that's way too complex a sentence for a grammar checker to have a clue about, so any "correction" will be sort of random.

You think of this as "fun"? Yow! I prefer to use grammar-checker CDs as coasters for hot drinks.

 
At 12:28 PM, September 21, 2007 Blogger The Ridger, FCD had this to say...

Yeah, I don't use it myself. But student papers come in with it turned on, so ...

OTOH, my students haven't taken its weirder advice, anyway!

 

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