Thursday, November 13, 2008

"On Obama's victory style"

I meant to mention this earlier, but David Crystal has an analysis of Obama's victory speech at his blog. It begins like this:
Speaking as a stylistician - as opposed to a human being (if you'll allow me the distinction), as excited as anyone about this event - it blew me away. As the speech started, I turned to my wife and said, 'He'll never do it!' What was I noticing? It was the opening if-clause, a 41-word cliff-hanger with three who-clause embeddings. Starting a major speech with a subordinate clause? And one of such length and syntactic complexity? I thought he would be lucky if he was able to round it off neatly after the first comma. Try it for yourself: get a sense of the strain on your memory by starting a sentence with a 19-word if-clause, and see what it feels like. But he didn't stop at 19 words. The first who-clause is followed by a second. Then a third. It was real daring. It's difficult for listeners to hold all that in mind. But it worked. And then the short 4-word punch-clause. And deserved applause.
It's an excellent review from the rhetorical-and-syntactical viewpoint.

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At 12:41 AM, November 14, 2008 Anonymous Anonymous had this to say...

Would love to hear what he thinks of Sarah Palin's sentences to nowhere.

 

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