Thursday, September 03, 2009

Why does it say that?

Every now and then, I hear something I know I've heard before, but this time it strikes me odd.

Local news anchor teasing the 11:00 news:
And then, why a survey says people are waiting to retire. And it's not the economy.
Surely, it's not why the survey says that; it's the survey saying why people are waiting...

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At 11:24 AM, September 04, 2009 Blogger fev had this to say...

Ghost sentence adverb! "Next, why police say a man ran naked down the street waving a broadax" is a second-cycle version of "A man is in jail after police say he ran naked down the street waving a broadax."

The attribution is there to qualify the main clause, and news language is really careless about where it goes. J-classes need more diagramming and less hoo-hah about split verbs. /sermon

 

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