Monday, July 12, 2010

rather than

Here's a fairly odd sentence from Call Mr Fortune, written by HC Bailey in 1920:
Lucia Charlecote was so frail, of such a simplicity, that she looked rather like an angel in one of the primitive pictures than a woman.
"She looked rather like an angel" is fine for me, meaning "somewhat like an angel". But then I hit that "than", and the sentence derails. I can't use "rather ... than" like this. In fact, though I realize he means "more than" when he says "rather than", the sentence is deeply weird for me.

What's very odd, though, is I can reverse it (sort of). That is, I can use "rather than", but only as a unit:
Lucia Charlecote was so frail, of such a simplicity, that she looked like an angel in one of the primitive pictures rather than a woman.
Now, "rather than" doesn't have to be a unit. For instance, I can say "I'd rather be an angel than a woman" or "rather see an angel than a woman". But there we have a modal, and rather's in front of the verb, not after it - a modifier rather than a part of the complement.

And, of course, I can keep his information structuring by using "more ... than":
Lucia Charlecote was so frail, of such a simplicity, that she looked more like an angel in one of the primitive pictures than a woman.
What about you? Does his "she looked rather like an angel than a woman" work for you?

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At 12:11 AM, July 13, 2010 Blogger Ms. Garrison's Dr. Who Club had this to say...

No, it doesn't work for me, either. It threw me clear out of the sentence. But I've seen that very construction somewhere else recently...can't remember where. It made me do a double-take then, too.

 
At 5:34 AM, July 13, 2010 Anonymous Q. Pheevr had this to say...

I get the same garden path effect that you describe, but once I get past that, I find "she looked rather like an angel than a woman" acceptable, though slightly archaic. I think the additional material ("in one of the primitive pictures") exacerbates the garden path effect; the extra distance between rather and than makes it harder to go back and reinterpret the rather as a comparative instead of a vague degree word.

 

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